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[Pit vs Mechasonic 1 part1]

Pretty Crappy

Kind of disappointed that there is yet another crappy flash that made it past judgment. I don't care about whatever effort you put into this, because your effort doesn't show.

You do not deserve a break for it being your first flash. There are plenty of great artists that had great first flashes, or at least decent ones that were at least enjoyable.

And then just pretend I said what eveyrone before me has said.

yoshi565 responds:

well lets see your amazing jaw dropping flash

[Seven Eight Nine]

Good

Everyome else has given you great comments, so I'll mention a small thing I saw related to using flash, which is at the end when it says in theaters, the big 8 at the top is clickable (switches from an arrow pointer to a hand pointer) yet does nothing. So yeah, maybe watch out for that in case you forgot code or make something else do something you don't want.

djnet responds:

it was gonna be an easter egg...but i changed that...lol i didnt think anyone would notice

[the dark wish intro]

Sorry, no collection for you.

Fix the audio. It was very choppy, and when it wasn't choppy it wsas fuzzy.

Art was very sub-par. Animation in general was jumpy. Make things flow better.

I don't mind short movies, but this was really short. Maybe get the full intro song and make an animation for it.

montano66 responds:

yeah but it aint easy animating

[The Brickwall 2!]

Enjpyable

It ended abruptly, and when it looped, the song on the first run didn't end, and it clashed a little bit as the song overlapped it on the second loop.

I suggest this being longer or come to a less immediate ending. Keep it up.

alcaknight responds:

Yeah, I guess it did end quite arubtly. I am going to make another one that will hopefully be much better. Thanks for watching!

[The Anger of Animation 3]

better

Liked it more cuz it was more original than the first two, whereas they seemed to have too many similarites to AvA, this one added some nice touches.

KobraEditing responds:

Thanks

[The DAVE Unit - Scene 1]

Augh my eyes.

Sorry, epileptic seizures FTL. That really turns me away from a movie when someone uses those.

Everything else. I had to turn my speakers up a little more to hear it, but i am currently having hearing trouble anyways, so i wont count that. Animation was consistent, and sometimes makes for a decent style, so props there. Otherwise didn't make sense since i couldnt hear it.

TheSalt responds:

Yeah, I'm new to flash and I had no Idea on what to do for that bit so I just did what I thought would be easy.

And about the sound, I'm using a mic that's older than I am So it's not very good I will try and do some better voice acting for the next flash I do...